The “Thoughts on Public Education (TOP-Ed)” blog put out by the Silicon Valley Education Foundation had the clever idea to ask Kilian Betlach, who used to write the delightful “Teaching in the 408″ blog, to ruminate on the school reform process. Betlach, previously a seventh-grade teacher in east San Jose, has just had a jarring personal experience with school reform. He is assistant principal of a small middle school in Oakland, Elmhurst Community Prep, forced to fix itself under federal rules.

Here is how he told the tale in a guest column, “Liposuction approach to school reform,” posted Aug. 8. The point he makes about the limpness and aimlessness of what is supposed to be a tough and constructive process deserves attention. This is going on all over the country.

By Kilian Betlach

Last March, the California Department of Education released a list of “persistently low-performing schools” that would be part of the federal School Improvement Grant (SIG) process. Our school was on it.

In the weeks and months that followed, as every day became increasingly dominated by our place on the list, our school community went through the Kübler-Ross grief cycle:

Shock: Are you kidding? Elmhurst Community Prep has posted a net gain of 39 API points in three years, and stands 120 points higher than the last year of the since-reconstituted Elmhurst Middle School. This is persistently low-achieving?

Denial: No way this is right. Get our picture of the front page of the paper.

Anger: This is what we do now? Not teaching and learning, but reading about federal grant processes? This is what’s best for kids?

Bargaining: We’re clearly caught in an algorithmic error. Tweak the algorithm and focus on some schools that more desperately need aggressive intervention.

Depression: Turns out the Department of Education welcomes algorithm changes the way Arizona welcomes immigrants.

Testing: Okay. We’re here. We have four options. We’re not closing (#1), and we’re not reconstituting again (#2). Are we going charter (#3) or doing this transformation thing (#4)?

Acceptance: As professional educators we feel the riptide urgency to close the achievement gap. We recognize that we have to get better. Our staff and our community believe the transformation option is a way to do this. Let’s roll some sleeves and get to work.

Roll up our sleeves we did. It hasn’t been an easy road, but we came out of this with a strong finish to the 2009-2010 school year, and a compelling plan to raise the quality of education we provide.

I came out it with the belief that the SIG process — and all similar initiatives — represent an insufficient, low-leverage path toward improving our schools. I do not believe that reform-by-grant-application is capable of bringing about the dramatic change our kids deserve.

Reform-by-grant-application asks small numbers of schools to make small changes over a short period of time, supported by temporary funding. Even if presented in a manner that does not discredit past improvement or spread disharmony and discord, such initiatives lack essential staying power and capacity building. Yes, we may have funding to extend the school day for the length of the grant, but then what? Yes, we may have funding for additional specialists to work with our kids, but how will we pay them after the grant expires?

The reform-by-grant ideology sees a school system in need of tweaks and temporary fixes — change, not reform. It’s the ideology of liposuction, not diet and exercise.

This is problematic, not because Elmhurst Community Prep and schools like us won’t benefit from increased funding. We may. The real problem lies in the stark reality that after all the grief and long hours of planning, after all the revisions and implementation meetings, the reform-by-grant-application approach may bring about better results in one or two of Oakland’s over 100 schools; it will have done nothing to reform the conditions that make improvement necessary in the first place.

Last year, I estimated that I would spend 5,125 miles on the road for my annual travel circuit. This year, it looks like The Graduate School will log another 4,858 miles as we traverse the Southeast. Invitations have been extended and registrations returned to attend Graduate and Professional School Fairs. Below is the list of schools our recruiters will attend. If you are curious about the programs we have to offer and are in the vicinity, let us know and we’ll set aside some time to talk with you. Or you can always ask for information directly from our website. As always, you can continue to read our adventures on this blog, Facebook and Twitter. And if you have any suggestions for new music to add to our drive-time playlist, let us know. Our selection is getting a little old.

Travel Schedule

Monday, September 27: Converse College Tuesday, September 28: Furman University Wednesday, September 29: Wofford College Thursday, September 30: Presbyterian

Wednesday, October 6: Lander University

Wednesday, October 13: Meredith College Thursday, October 14: Elon University Friday, October 15: UNC Chapel Hill

Tuesday, October 19: Morris College Wednesday, October 20: South Carolina State University Thursday, October 21: Emory Friday, October 22: Mercer

Wednesday, October 20: The Citadel Thursday, October 21: Winthrop University Thursday, October 21: College of Charleston

Thursday, October 28: Charleston Southern University Friday, October 29: Atlanta University Consortium

Monday, November 1: UNC Wilmington Wednesday, November 3: Winston- Salem State University Thursday, November 4: Wake Forest University

Thursday, November 11: Savannah State University

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September 3, 2010
Contact: Jim Tranquada, (323) 259-2990

A liberal arts education is the best possible preparation for a world of globalization, growing diversity, bewildering technological change, and political polarization, Occidental College Dean Jorge Gonzalez told the Class of 2014 at the College’s annual Convocation ceremony.

“We can’t predict the future. If you came to Oxy thinking someone will teach you all the answers, then you are naïve,” Gonzalez told the first-year students assembled in Thorne Hall to mark official opening of Occidental’s 124th academic year. “What you really need is the ability to learn how to learn, how to adapt, and that is exactly what a liberal arts education gives you. It will teach you how to read, write and speak effectively. It will develop your critical and analytical skills. These are skills that will serve you well regardless of what kind of profession you enter.”

Before delivering his remarks, Gonzalez presented Occidental’s two top teaching prizes to three faculty members selected by their peers and by students for their outstanding work in the classroom, in conducting research, and in the life of the College.

Amy Lyford, associate professor of art history and visual arts, and Dennis Eggleston, professor of physics, were presented with the Graham L. Sterling Memorial Award. Established in 1972 in memory of former trustee Graham Sterling, the Sterling Award is bestowed each year on one or more professors with a distinguished record of teaching, service, and professional achievement, as selected by faculty members.. Lyford and Eggleston were each presented with an engraved silver platter as well as a check for $1,000. Another $1,000 will be deposited into their department’s account.

Caroline Heldman, associate professor of politics, was presented with the Linda and Tod White ’59 Teaching Prize. Established in 2008, the White Prize is awarded based on the votes of sophomores, juniors and seniors, who are asked to nominate teachers who have the ability to engage students and increase their learning, as well as showing a real concern for individual students.

Superb teaching is only part of what Occidental offers, Gonzalez said. “We place special attention on diversity and global issues, and we are located in one of the most dynamic urban centers of the world,” he said. “Los Angeles offers you the world within five minutes of campus, an incredibly rich setting you need to take advantage of.”

But such a rich academic and urban setting is meaningless “unless you interact with it,” he added. “One of the greatest skills you can develop is the ability to have deep conversations with people who are very different than you. It takes talent to learn from people with different backgrounds … by the end of the semester, be sure you make a friend from a very different background.”

 

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Whether you need to write an essay for your application into college, or you need to write one for your class, there may be times where you’re stuck and that’s okay!  I’ve been there before and honestly, I don’t know what I would have done without the Internet.

You’re going to find that there are a lot of essay based websites out there.  Some are garbage, while others can provide you with a lot of details.  I wanted to showcase 5 websites that I endorse that not only will help you write a better essay, but give you ideas as well.

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  • #3 CollegeBoard - I have found a lot of good topics here and no matter what you want college related, you’re going to find that this site is going to help you with whatever you may need.  On their Essay Skills page, you’re going to find some examples, steps to writing one properly, and more.
  • #4 TeenInk - This is a great website for college essays because you can see how other people voted on them.  I didn’t really see this with the other sites.  Look at the topics, as well as what other people thought of them.  If you want, you can submit your work as well to get some great critiques.
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Most of these sites are going to be able to give you a rough idea on what you should do.  While you want to be creative, never copy an essay and reword this.  It just isn’t going to work.  Instead, be yourself and see what can work for you.

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